
For a while, this seemed like it was going to be an exploration of character and relationships, a novel that didn't really have a strong central "plot" so much as strong central "people," and that was fine with me. The setting was wonderful, and I thought Soli did an excellent job of building the relationships and lack thereof among the characters, orchestrating a well-wrought drama that didn't need a lot of external plot influences in order to propel it forward and keep my interest. And then...that all changed. It's like Soli wrote half the book, and then saw a documentary about the affects of nuclear testing on the South Pacific and was so compelled by it that she felt a need to make it an intrinsic part of her narrative. The book suddenly winged from slowly-built drama and character to talk of terrorists and staged kidnappings. It just doesn't seem to fit. The characters all abruptly find a sense of a purpose in a way that is completely disconnected from how the book seemed to be going before. And then, after a bunch of what can be considered melodrama, it goes back to the way it was before--all serene and subtle and wonderfully written. The switch of direction was jarring, and didn't seem to be particularly well done. It had me gaping at the page in complete disbelief, because it felt like a different book entirely.
For the most part, I liked this. The writing was very matter-of-fact, a style that I think lends itself well to character-driven works and works written with an omniscent point of view. But, as mentioned before, the sudden switch in narrative left me jarred out of the story and altogether discontented with it until it resumed its original tone toward the end. I was satisfied with the ending, other than one character's end scene which tended toward the purple end of the writing spectrum. Because of that weird middle bit (I feel like it probably should have been worked into a different book entirely, instead of smashed into this one; the premise wasn't bad, but the execution and placement really was) I can't really endorse this whole-heartedly, and I can see why it has such a low Goodreads rating. It was bound for 4 to 4.5 stars, but as it is, I feel like I can't give it that high of a rating. I'd probably read something else from Soli, but I feel like I'd have to scrutinize the reviews on it first, to make sure that this disconnection in the middle isn't a recurring theme.
Oh, and there's a reference to Portal.
Oh, and there's a reference to Portal.
3 to 3.5 stars out of 5.
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